March 5

 After revising my literary argument paragraph I noticed there were minor changes that were needed.I decided to shorten any sentences that ran on too long.I also found ways to explain my evidence better.This helps my writing be stronger because it shows how I am strongly able to support my argument.This shows the readers that I know what I am explaining.There were also points where I felt I started being repetitive with my explanations.I decided to take these sentences away and replace them with something that hasn't been mentioned.After this I learn to not do this in my writitng.

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